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My first newsletter for a desktop publishing class. Any expert comments on how I can make this better are welcome. All the pictures are from other deviantart members. don't sue me cause it was only for a class.
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Hey ya!
i absolutly love your design. very nice.
great choice of colors and photos. the layout is very clear and easy to follow. thumbs up :-D
I just have a some suggestions to make:
- since the text is splitted into two columns, it's better to justify the text.
- the text in the calender column, is hard to read. cause the space in between the letters is way to small.
- on the second page, right above the green block, there is this one sentence. it needs to find its way back into the first column.
that were all my suggestions :-D
i absolutly love your design. very nice.
great choice of colors and photos. the layout is very clear and easy to follow. thumbs up :-D
I just have a some suggestions to make:
- since the text is splitted into two columns, it's better to justify the text.
- the text in the calender column, is hard to read. cause the space in between the letters is way to small.
- on the second page, right above the green block, there is this one sentence. it needs to find its way back into the first column.
that were all my suggestions :-D